2009年11月16日 星期一

Why people attend to college?

First, career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college; they know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skill for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.

Second, universities and colleges help people have new experience on life. Many students leave their home and move to live by themselves when they go to university. This is the first time that they had to create resolution by themselves without their parents help. Creating resolution will increase their knowledge of themselves. Moreover, students of the university can meet different students from different nationalities and religions so students can learn about different cultures around the world.

Third, it’s a good chance to be independent while we leave home to go to college or university. In other words, we need to handle all the stuff on campus without mom and dad. For instance, we need to do the laundry or driving outside to do food shopping ourselves, no one will do that for us. In addition, we need to learn making decisions ourselves, good practice for thinking independently.

Fourth, students attend to university or collage to increase their self-knowledge of their personality in life. They attend so that they would increase their knowledge in subject which they find interesting. For example, many students study science because they are interested in science but they work in that kind of business.

In the end, I think that there are many reasons that people attend college or university. I think during college life, we can achieve and learn many important things. That is the reason why we must to attend college.

9 則留言:

  1. To Lala
    You English composition is really good. You have a complete organization. Also, your details given to support this essay is great. By Jack

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  3. Hi Lala
    I admire your composition a lot. You have a great organization on this writing. There no serious grammar and spelling errors. I think you do a good job.

    Edward

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  4. Hi Lala!
    Your English is good, oh my god! I do very appreciate your whole ideas and well-organized structure. The things that I gotta suggest is that some trivial grammar errors could be found, such as "parents' help." But there is nothing else to be picky on your essay!
    Sincerely yours, Peter.

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  5. Hi, 巨砲La!
    Your article is so good, and i extremely support you that we students who lives far from the school can be independant.
    There is a simple thing that you may notice, that is the preposition!!!
    ^.<(<--it is designed by Edward's favorite, Josh)

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  6. hi~lala!!
    you did a perfect job on telling all the reasons why we need to enter the college, and all the things you record is true. nice project!!!
    >> by sharon

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  7. Hi LALA

    Your essay is so good. You had good structure and great at using grammar. YOU ROCK!

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  8. Dear Lala,
    I love your compisision and ideals. It's a interesting essay!

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  9. Hi, LaLa
    I think your structure is good. I know clearly about why people attend to college.
    Eunice

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